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[faithrose]

Here is one of my poems:

LIFE;

A requirement to..

Embrace the rush

Feel the adrenaline

Go for the high

Worth it? Answer Yes or No?

Number your blessings

Remember to count them all

Escape the reasons within safety classifications

This is living and riding on the edge

And of course is deserving

The rim gives opportunity

So nod to the extremity

If you dare

But once implied

Do not trudge alone

Find a faithful friend

Support, love and companionship

Are the essentials

Someone needs for the edge

In different wording

Necessary for

That preserves the journey

Which may face deep water

Unexpectedly

That is

LIFE!

[Kaliratra]

Hehe, cute! *nods*

[Stupendous Man]

very nice thanks for sharing!

[faithrose]

Here is another one of my poems

Growing up
can be a pain
but it can also be
fun and exerlerating
take each moment
and live it fully
remain positive
even when hard times
come your way
soon those tears will pass
the Higher Power must think
you are a very strong person
to have ugly times thrown at you
life is fulll of ups and downs
don't give up
balance out your life
it will even out the
good and the bad

[Stupendous Man]

cute, sounds like a motivator

[faithrose]

why do you think it is cute, my life poem?

This post has been edited by faithrose201: 12 November 2007 - 10:27 PM

[Stupendous Man]

I don't mean it in a bad way, I think it's a nice, sweet poem

[faithrose]

Here is another one of my poems:

My life is like a T-Shirt

I'm like a worn out T-Shirt
with a few holes in it
I've been thrown
thrown into the darkness
of depression
I've been trappled on
trappled by hateful words
coming from the people I met
I've been ripped
my heart has been ripped
broken so many times

But I have been picked up
by my own resiliency and friend's backs
I've been washed
by forgiveness that I've
extended and of myself
I also been washed
by new words of encouragement
I've been stitched up
by love and happiness
which important people
sew in me

Now this t-shirt is
brand new almost
actually when
forgiveness was shown
I got a new t-shirt
I'm adding color to it
it does not need to be plain
for miracles happen
when a beginning starts
that make up the colors
on my t-shirt
-written last year

[faithrose]

Here is yet another poem lol


Do not dismiss because of looks
Or the way of dress
What makeup is worn
And how stylish hair
for a jewel will be found
of love and energetic humility
that would have gone unnoticed
if looking past wasn't in care

Do not dismiss because of voice
Or how little said
What opinion stays
And how quiet reserved
For like a butterfly will emerge
Of thought and loud respect
That would go unheard
If giving time weren't worthwhile

Do not dismiss an intellectual mind
Or clever insight
What numbers match
And how smart or fair
For learning is much
Of practical and kindness shown
That would not thrive
If searching did not involve a pleasant scare
-written april 2007

[faithrose]

Here is a Poem I wrote called How long

How long…

Should I be alone forever?

Will anyone know that I'm alone and around?

Would anyone care?

Or notice!

How long…

Should I find a mate, what would happen?

Will he still care about me?

Would he even bother to look?

Or wonder!

How long..

Frustrating passion and desire

Confuses me beyond my wildest nightmares

Unexpected worries

Over shadows my confidence

Untold stories

Hop into memory

How long…

Should I follow behind selfish thinking?

Will my heart break again?

Would I feel invisible?

Or unworthy!

How long…

Mixed longings and hope

Got me nervous with uncontrollable excitement

Tears of pain

Never seem to go away

How long…

I want to find what love is

I desire to experience joy

How long?

Oh how long must I wait!
-written last year

[Stupendous Man]

The last one shows a lot of emotion, I really like it.
They're all great, thank you for sharing!

[faithrose]

Thanks

Here is yet another Poem called Singleness. I wrote it yesterday

A single laughter in the room
and no one to joyfully cry with
singleness
as bounceful pains

an empty embrace
and no one to kiss or hug
lonliness
as haunting grips

a one way converstation
and no one to enter the room
emptyness
as unpleasant echoes

a break in my heart
and no one to fix it
sadness
as broken glass

By Andrea

This post has been edited by faithrose201: 22 November 2007 - 07:33 PM

[faithrose]

Here is a poem I wrote in March 2007


How to get rid of Darkness

Rest upon one's shoulder
Unveil eyes to capture
The unspoken truth
Tears may come
Releasing anxiety as they unwillingly fall
Embrace this moment
Before moving forward
To feel secure
Conversing unlocks the misery
Though painful it will be
True friends are
Near
Close to you
Uncertainty creates wonder
Will time heal?
But dance anyway
A partner has your hand
In this torn and hateful world
The sun is coming
Practice, practice, practice
Moving one pace ahead
Strength will come in every step
So rejoice and don't give up
Hope amounts every day

This post has been edited by faithrose: 20 August 2008 - 11:50 PM

[faithrose]

I think Sal should read my poetry too...not that I don't appreciate your comments Robbie

[Stupendous Man]

well all the same I enjoy reading them

[faithrose]

And I like reading your comments

[faithrose]

This is poem that I have yet to title. I wrote it May 6, 2007

Uncontrolable excitement
must be containted
by patience and
a shiney cage
to protect the heart

time will come
when the cage
will be melted by
a voice and smell
that will be recognized

but for now
only hope and wait
time has to come
keep talking loudly
let a voice be heard

that voice
speaks of gentleness
and ethusiasm
longer then the earth around
processed thoughs
keep happiness safe

no hurting now
can be endured
for everything must be sure
so keep the hope
contained inside

[Sammilicious]

they're great Andrea! Please share more of them

[faithrose]

I have been writing still and here is a poem I wrote December 13, 2007

It's called Crush

This indescribable feeling
circuts through my head to my toes
some say it's a crush
but who really knows
it's like a breath of fresh air
cool, crisp and making me re-energized
giving off to others an excitable fibe
I feel it way down to my bones
suppossedly to stay for awhile
and then shows up in my radiant eyes
how long will this feeling last?
how do I know this feeling is real?
can anyone else sense or feel it?
but who really knows cause
some say it's a crush that
circuts through my head to my toes
this indiscribable feeling

this undefinable feeling
opened and exposed
has been defined as a crush
so people are guessing
is a tricky action word
how do I show it?
do I welcome it in?
if and how so?
a risk must be taken
trust and faith
are manitory
so people are guessing what
has been defined as a crush
opened and exposed
this undefinable feeling

[SuperSven]

I really liked your poems, the last one showed some fear, maybe you could explore that?
It might make for a really deep and passionate poem